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Richards, Keith (Hircine High Transfer)
« May 7, 2009 16:01:02 GMT -6 »
Name:[/b] Keith Richards
Age:[/b] 15
School:[/b] John C. Fremont High
Class:[/b] Sophomore
Nationality:[/b] American
Ethnicity:[/b] Various European Descents
Gender:[/b] Male
Sexuality:[/b] Heterosexual
Height:[/b] 5'9
Weight:[/b] 158
Dominant Hand:[/b] Right

  • Head: Short blond, pushed back and held with wax, something that keeps his hair of the way as well as keeping it from being used as a weapon against him. His eyes are hazel but rarely seen.

  • Torso: His chest muscles still need toning and his skin is untanned. His body shape shows that he is quite adapt with speed, but has a deceptive strength about him as well, with broad shoulders and strong muscles.

  • Arms & Hands: Well built for speed. All solid bones and lean muscle with only the smallest amount of fat. Has no scars or discernible markings that stand out, although with his chosen activities this is likely to change quickly. Average palm size, fingers are a tad thinner than most, and his knuckles are very prominent when made into a fist. His hands have a deceptive strength about them as he uses them frequently to grip onto limbs.

  • Legs and Feet: Legs are only solid bones and strong lean muscle. His legs were naturally trained for speed, precision, and long performance. His feet are average size although wider than normal, aiding his balance.


Personality:[/b] Superficial charm, a sense of extreme entitlement, a lack of remorse for hurting others, and a persistent agitated or depressed feeling when alone. Likes to inflict pain to others, animals, and occasionally himself. Hurting other people, and getting hurt himself, pain of any kind comes as a pleasure to him. Although it isn't the physical pleasure but the psychological understanding that he uses pain as control. He will speak coarsely just to get a reaction, and he'll pick apart people if he finds their weaknesses.

  • A pattern of unstable and intense interpersonal relationships characterized by alternating between extremes of idealization and devaluation

  • Identity disturbance: markedly and persistently unstable self-image or sense of self

  • Umpulsivity in at least two areas that are potentially self-damaging (spending, sex, violence, eating)

  • Recurrent suicidal behavior, gestures, or threats, or self-mutilating behavior (yet to crop up)

  • Affective instability due to a marked reactivity of mood (e.g., intense episodic dysphoria, irritability, or anxiety usually lasting a few hours and only rarely more than a few days)

  • Chronic feelings of emptiness

  • Inappropriate, intense anger or difficulty controlling anger (e.g., frequent displays of temper, constant anger, recurrent physical fights)

  • Severe dissociative symptoms.


Fighting Style
The majority of his style focuses on the hands and strength of the arms. With this style of fighting one must have natural arm strength, and a high endurance for pain. Keith possesses both. Straight punches, jabs, crosses, and uppercuts are the favored punches used with this style of fighting. In Keith's case his use of this fighting style gives him an edge in battle, as he is completely fueled by emotion when in combat. Which suits his personality exceptionally with his burst of rage and awkward mood swings. With his fascination of pain he also has become quite adept with locks and throws that can lead him to larger levels of control.

Strengths
The strong point of his fighting style is his ability to lay devastating blows upon an opponent. Has built up some evasion and has practiced countering when not on the offensive. Usually Keith will attempt to take his opponents out with one or two key punches in vital areas. Using this method he constantly targets areas such as the temples; solar plexus, groin, and the cerebral bridge.

Weaknesses
The weaknesses of this fighting style is that he will sacrifice his own bodily harm to inflict a harder blow, which doesn't always succeed and the fact that when he is truly offensive he burns through energy faster. His speed and strength are only formidable when applied at the same time. This combination is only compounded by the fact that his frequent targeting of vital areas can leave him predictable, and thus easier to deal with defensively.

History:[/b] There was nothing all that surprising about Keith's history. He had grown up as a boy interested in pain and death. Acted violently to people who frustrated him or did anything that he didn't like, starting with a first grade girl who tried to steal his nacho lunchables, and went to the hospital with a pencil stabbed through her hand. When questioned by the psychiatrist, as was mandated by the school, he merely stared the man down until it was decided he was in shock about his own behavior.

But it was merely a starting point in a long list of violence toward fellow students and animals. Around his neighborhood several pets were going missing. Cats were the most often, he didn't mind dogs, but cats he always hated as they seemed useless. He would strangle them, let them claw at his hand as they fought for their lives, and go home and wash the cuts out with soap like a good little boy after coming home from a hard day of play in the sand box.

All this alone would not have been too much of a problem, except for the local cat population, but the violence was growing boring, and with hormones pulling his mind toward girls, he was finding himself feeling alone and couldn't enjoy himself any more. That is until he was invited to a Senior party as a joke on his freshmen year and had his first taste of consensual sex with a drunk Senior too shit faced to realize she was having sex with a minor.

After experiencing such a thing his band of interests rose to another level. Having turned fifteen and become a sophomore it's another thing the school system had to try to handle as the school populace started to gradually learn his name. His exploits were not going too far beyond simple violence in school, there has been very little to really put him out of the crowd. There is only a handful of people who know how dangerous he really is.

He fully expects to make a bigger impression on his new environment given the proper amount of time.

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Richards, Keith (Hircine High Transfer)
« May 15, 2009 0:09:50 GMT -6 »
I wasn't sure if this was done or not, so I'm picking it apart anyways.

1. Your title of the thread is incorrect. The format is Last name, First name (other info). Other info being WIP or completed, or transfer, etc.

2. Hardening the bone in your knees isn't a normal. Normally, cartilage would be worn down, making the knee a weak point instead.

3. Another weakness must be added to balance out the strengths.

4. Also, was his event at the party etc at the Chula Vista Collection or at a different school. Is he new to this school, or has he been going there for awhile?

5. Which of the schools he is going to is not listed. Please choose one.

If you have any questions, feel free to pm me.

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Richards, Keith (Hircine High Transfer)
« May 17, 2009 9:07:39 GMT -6 »
Meh, made the changes.

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Richards, Keith (Hircine High Transfer)
« May 17, 2009 20:43:33 GMT -6 »
The appropriate modifications have been made. Bio approved; welcome to The Collective.

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