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« May 15, 2009 20:17:07 GMT -6 »
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OOC: This post and thread commemorates the official opening of roleplaying here at Chula Vista, so welcome and thanks for your patience as we have worked on the site and continue to move towards its final completion!

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It felt like any other May morning: a warm air nipped by cold up drafts, the sky a fading orange as the Sun crept higher, and the sluggish start quickly losing its alien discomfort as routine took over. Truly, had my day planner been stolen and my duties squandered, that's all the day could have been - a simple summer day.

That's not how life works though. At least for me.

The dull black sedan was cruising at a crippled pace through the winding roads of San Diego Country's eastern mountain range, a brief boundary that did its best to keep me from what was rightfully mine - it never worked. The whole of thirty minutes was spent mindlessly listening to my new Deputy Director Mitchell Weiss run over the details of today's schedule. He was a calm and orchestrated German, a reported transfer from the Director's office up north in San Francisco. The fact he was so green in my presence was clear since he failed to recognize just how bored I was. I already knew the schedule; he was only reading it over so the old man - me - would not forget so quickly.

How foolish the young can be.

I knew damn well what day it was: it was the opening school day of the Chula Vista Collective's summer semester. That was nothing special in comparison to the past ten years though; what mattered was the fact that each of the Collective's three schools had entirely new administrators. All three. And not just a bunch of old white men looking to have an easy break before retirement; a bunch of youngsters, not even in their forties. And now they were about to start their new careers in my Collective. Clearly it was a more important day than the last ones had ever been. Especially considering the circumstances of each administrator in particular.

The wristwatch on my arm told me it was nearing a quarter to eight o' clock as the sedan pulled past the Collective campus' western gate. The smooth road was filled with a few other cars as they drove to and from each school campus, though the sidewalks surrounding us became increasingly packed with students of all ages - boys before puberty, girls just entering high school, men nearing graduation with a bachelors, a few women working toward their doctorate, and any other sort of face or life you could imagine. Each was uniformed with their respective school style, and though tired, had a step to them that cried some kind of anticipation for the new year.

I watched my children with a grin. I was excited too.

Today's purpose required something of a tour throughout each school and a personal meeting with their administrators. Nothing flashy, just enough to get a point across. The one where I remained at the top. First stop was John C. Fremont High, on the campus' northwest edge. The sedan pulled up with a quiet hush, the windows fairly tinted and the driver calm as I straightened the black tie cuffing my dark button up and grabbed hold of the walking cane that sat next to me. Weiss just nodded to my silence and exited the car so to come around and open mine.

I stepped out, looking no different than I had for the last ten years: silver slimmed spectacles, a theme of black in my formal suit, the white in my hair and the stern grip in my aging hands, and that contemplative frown I'm told scares the lesser students to shivers. The main entrance to Fremont was bustling with activity today, but in such an orderly form of bloodthirst and excitement that was not accustomed to other school mornings. There was a routine in this event, one I was expecting entirely.

I stood there, watching the crowd's circle build and the cries for more rise - not toward me, but to a student on the other side of that massive wall of bodies, their cheers for a fight, their woes over seeing me. It was nothing new; the same welcoming committee had been happening for years now. The particular student grew excitement from the idea of fighting someone at the main entrance of Fremont High at the start of every school year. It was their routine, after all.

But Weiss didn't know that. He stared at the crowd in awe, shocked to see any sort of collective mass together over something so frighteningly simple, and glanced to me for an explanation. I gave him no glance in return, and instead gave him a simple sentence, as I felt the pits of my cheeks puff and widen as I spoke back, though still watching the crowd ahead.

"They do this every year Mitchell. It's their way to say 'hello'."

Weiss just glanced back to the crowd in perplexion, nodded his head, and glanced back at me, explaining his shock, "Frankly sir... this is new to me. Who do you mean... they?"

With this I gazed at him, holding that curious eye for a while, and then slowly allowed myself to smile quite broadly. I chose not to answer him. Instead, I'd let my children do it for me.

After all, it was a new day.
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« May 15, 2009 22:16:45 GMT -6 »
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OOC: Hope this was alright. If not, message me and I'll fix.


A new day indeed, but this Junior didn't really care for it all that much. It meant that he was going to get bogged down with ridiculous amounts of homework, probably more so then the year before. In the end though, he'd remain and A student, and apart from this day he would never complain about his workload again. He allowed himself the first day, and that was it.

Alden had been for a couple of hours already today. He was use to getting woken up early for all of his life. It had become something of a habit for him over the years, so he was wide awake as he walked down the side walk. Those amber hazel eyes of his couldn't help but wander toward the rising sun as his feet clicked slightly with each step. It wouldn't be too long before he began to near the campus, and something caught his eye.

Ah yes.. I wondered if it was going to happen again.

The cheers hadn't really registered in his head until now, and although Alden enjoyed fighting himself, he had a reputation to uphold. At least that was what his father always told him, and his father's word was law. His fingers would clench slightly as he changed directions and began to wander toward the crowd for a moment. He'd shake his head slightly for a moment. Alden knew he could wipe the floor with most of these kids here.

If only I could get away with fighting right now..

Glancing off to his left, Alden would notice someone else. Director Navarro himself, standing nearby was someone Alden could only assume worked for him. Alden had been in Henry Knox for two years now, he had seen the man before but he had never spoken to him before. He had only caught the last bit of what was spoken between them, and the junior felt obliged to speak.

Frankly sir... this is new to me. Who do you mean... they?

"Action men. The mindless, macho brutes that are too stupid to focus on their studies, and prefer bashing people's faces in for their kicks."

He'd smile slightly after he spoke, returning his gaze toward the rowdy students nearby. The slight English accent was still there, along with quite a little bit of English slang thrown in. While he hadn't been in England for a couple years now, the slang terms still stuck with him. Whether they knew them or not, Alden didn't really care. But he hoped he had answered his question.

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« May 15, 2009 22:41:19 GMT -6 »
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And summer semester was over.

"Finally..."

Ray muttered, the Japanese American pacing into the Grounds. His dark brown hair swung from side to side as his body swayed with every step. His dark brown eyes glanced around, looking for things worth his attention, though catching sight of a fight that was somewhere to his right. He stopped in his tracks for a while, analysing the battle with a soft smile on his face. Well, wasn't that interesting? He shook his head for a moment, letting out a sigh.

"Never a dull day here, huh?"

He chuckled, before making his way deeper into the crowd, not wanting to get involved in any sort of shit right now. As soon as he knew he was safe enough from getting dragged in, he stopped, pulling his hands out of his pockets. He was wearing a white dress shirt, his sleeves folded up to his elbows. The attire was completed with a pair of black tapered pants and a loosened tie, far from secure.

At that, he kept on looking around, as if looking for someone. Where the hell was he? He had not seen the guy for a week now, and he was getting a lot worried about him. He sighed, sliding his right foot back, his black leather shoes making faint trails on the soil. Where was his twin? It was not that hard to find him, due to that twin-link between them, but now, Ray was having a seriously hard time looking for him.

He sighed, surrendering to fate, knowing that he was going to show up sooner or later. Ray then looked at the podium, etching the faces of the top figures of the Collective into his mind, knowing that he would be seeing them again sooner or later. Not that he was being egoistical here, but his history spoke for himself. He was an average A student. And he was only going to get smarter.

"... Well, this is certainly going to be a fun year."


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« May 15, 2009 23:10:46 GMT -6 »
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This was the part of the year that never failed to amuse the the green haired boy...new school year, new people and new digs. Other than than that, all it was was another year. The only problem was, Aternity wasn't enjoying all this fun of seeing friends, of going to class, or blowing something up in the computer lab.

The boy was still asleep.

And apparently rather hard, sleeping right through his alarm clock.

Ternie didn't wake until the sun battered his face, and when it happened, still all you heard from him was a groan. Then a twitch, and then finally, his free right hand covered his mismatched eyes. Another groan, and he rolled, right out of his bed, missing an arm of course. His right leg was more or less permanent...he didn't take that out without good reason.

Walking was a good thing.

It only took him 15 minutes to get ready, brushing his hair back once, getting his clothes on, brushing teeth. All the small things. What wasn't a small thing was his arm, kept lovingly on his workdesk. It was quickly locked into the nerve joint at his shoulder, and locked it in. The software booted, and he twisted his limb to everywhere a human could. Looks like nothing had broken. he stuck on his glasses, and left.

That was a relief...he was on time, but for what?

Classes didn't start for another 4 hours at O'Hare.

Instead, Aternity walked deftly to Fremont High, if not just to see the new blood, but to see the so-called new administration team that was working at Chula Vista. Looking around, it was plainly obvious that he, besides the Director...was the oldest one here. Everyone else looked like some overgrown high school student that looked like they were over compensating for something.

Yeah.

Just as sarcastic and cynical as ever...




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« May 15, 2009 23:59:52 GMT -6 »
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It was pretty exciting.

Another bout at the beginning of the term; oh the joyous sound was almost too much. Jinn had been at the Campus for the longer period of time and was one of the first to catch sight of the brawl take place. It was healthy for men to fight. It was what made you strong, determined, and willed to the future. Without fighting man would be nothing but a lack of excitement. And excitement was what made the world thrive, what made the Collective thrive.

Through his two year at Fremont, Jinn saw and experienced many events. Kids these days were violent and violence led to public displays of multiple men or women attacking other men or women. That’s how it worked; how it always worked, and he wouldn’t change it for the world. Because life was something to be enjoyed, something that was to be spontaneous and exciting. What else would make it exciting than living your life always ready for a challenge, always working for the top?

That was Jinn. He never stopped. If he wasn’t number one, he was going to be. Never hesitant, never willing to stop; Jinn was a fighter. One who lived in a world where you used force to get on top. He fought in and out of the ring. You had to make a name for yourself to be acknowledged, and Jinn’s ego always needed the occasional boost. That’s why he liked it here. Not only could he live his life the way he dreamed, the way he thrived for, but he could relate to the people. He knew them, they knew him and they understood each other. Of course, some simply fight to fight, but not Jinn. No, it’s all about being number one. The fame, the fortune, and the knowledge that you are better than everyone else.

He mouth salivated at the though of it. He craved that feeling. The cheer of spectators, the fight itself – when your bare knuckles plant onto the rough side of your opponents face – it sent shivers down his spine. This was his place, these were his people, and he would be king.

Jinn walked towards the Campus grounds to get a better look at the sight. Already, many students were arriving, catching the battle as they walked by. One particular point of interest was that the old man, the Director of the collective, was here himself, with what Jinn assumed was an assistant.

“Heh. Wrong place at the wrong time, I suppose.”

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« May 16, 2009 0:04:22 GMT -6 »
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"Hey, looks like the new kid's itchin' to start this year off for us!"

The group of three boys closest to the middle of the circle scoffed, nodding towards the director of Tiao Lei Shen. The chinese student didn't reply, continuing to lean against the wall as he placed his left foot against it, shoving his hands into his pockets and dangling his head to the ground. His hair fell over his face, masking the smirk as the words of the trio sunk into his head.

"Whatsamatta, chink? You no got ears?"

One of the three stated, stepping forward towards Tiao. Had Tiao not caught the racial slur, he would have understanded little of the Mexican boy's words. Sighing under his breath, Tiao prepared himself for the next stage of his stay in the Chula Vista Collective: Establish Dominance.

Before the boy could even continue to press his attempt at intimidation, Tiao snatched the boys index finger as he probed it forward towards his shoulder. Sliding his foot off the wall Tiao bent his knees, lowering his center of gravity as he pulled the digit down. Attempting to keep it from breaking, the boy exclaimed what could only be described as a poor imitation of a Navajo chant, turned his legs into jello and bent tried to move down along with the finger.

Before the other two could come in to help, Tiao shoved his left hand into the mexican's throat, gripping the throat tightly as he pushed him back into the second guy, still gripping the finger and the throat. As his back collided with the chest of the other, Tiao snapped his left leg out, kicking the first boy in the balls. As he doubled over, Tiao's right hand swung wide in a slashing Tiger strike, striking the second boy with the heel of his palm in the nose ,just as the blindspot was cleared from the first boy's head.

Having taken out two students slightly larger than himself down in just a few seconds, the third one hesitated. That hesitation was all Tiao needed as he sent his left hand in a palm strike to the center of his chest. The boy blocked the arm, taking the bait as Tiao grabbed onto the block, sweeping his left leg at the ankle of his right foot. At the same time, Tiao's right hand slammed into his ear, sweeping him off his feet as he slammed him to his side to the ground below. Leaving all three on the ground groaning in pain, Tiao strode away from the now parting circle, moving towards who he instantly recognized as the authority. As he did, he caught the last few parts of what was being spoken.

"...the mindless, macho brutes that are too stupid to focus on their studies, and prefer bashing people's faces in for their kicks."

"Correction." Tiao stated as he smirked once more, placing his left hand atop Alden's shoulder, switching his gaze towards the Director only. "We're establishing the A listers now, so we don't have this problem later."

What Tiao had said wasn't too far from the stretch of the truth. He wasn't interested in school politics, not this year. But what he needed would take some care. The first step was complete, establishing just enough of a name for himself that he would be recognized, and if done as well as he thought, that would leave him relatively unbothered by other classmates for the time being. There was business to do, after all.

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Man, this its pretty hot out here...

Sam thought to himself as he unbottonned his camo top, showing the white tank top covering his chest. Sam was used to the desert heat, but it was still pretty warm even closer to the border than he was used to. In clothes he didn't wear often, it made him feel all the more uncomfortable, at least for now.

Exhaling the desert air he pulled and waved on his lapels, fanning some air to his chest. After a few minutes of this, Samuel began to crawl of goosebumps, a sudden cold draft over his sweat causing him to shiver for just a moment. He let go of his top, leaving it unbuttoned as decided to make some rounds, growing bored of whatever it was they were waiting for.

Soon a fight broke out, originating at the spot Sam had just moved from minutes prior. By the time he returned, whatever happened to the three guys was over and done. Shaking his head Samuel stepped into the dissipating circle, standing over one of the boys who was currently cupping his groin in his hands rather pathetically.

"Already guys? C'mon, get up. The Director will be here soon. He doesn't need to see your sad asses laying here when he does."

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« May 16, 2009 0:55:28 GMT -6 »
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There was one thing that Delilah wanted to do today, and that was meet the Director before she was supposed to. What was the point of waiting around for four hours doing things she didn't want to do? Those "items" were delegated to those better suited to the job than herself, and she had decided to walk to where the Director was supposed to be: Fremont. Why start there? Why not at the University? It was a small slight, but one that Delilah would add to a long list. Considering the female, the list would be growing all the time.

She had walked the way to the school, arriving shortly after the Director. Delilah Standish, Minister of the University, hadn't been seen on campus before hand. She could probably be taken for an older college student, considering her looks. She was slender, with a black dress vest on over a see through blouse. Black slacks tight to her legs, and finished with heeled black boots. The vest was high enough to make her more than decent, with two rows of silver buttons going down the front. Her black hair was perfectly curled, make up on, and icy eyes roving the scene she found. The thing that made her really "stand out"? She had a weapon. A fencing foil on her hip, held by her belt.

Lots of students were standing around, some lying on the ground. Those icy orbs looked from one face to another all in quick succession. She walked up to the side of the man who had to be the Director. He matched her intel perfectly.

"Hello Director. Wonderful day."

She spoke with ease, her voice velvet. Delilah Standish stood there, Minister of O'Hare University. Looking at the after math of the fight, and the silly little boys who had started them. And truth be told, they were such yummy looking males too. Too bad they were jail bait. Well, maybe for some that wouldn't stop her.

"I trust your morning was well. I thought I'd accompany you around."

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« May 16, 2009 1:14:18 GMT -6 »
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"Doctor Navarro?"

The brunette's eyes flickered up toward her phone as her secretary paged her through the phone's intercom. She promptly responded with a "Yes?" to which her secretary answered,

"Head of security on line one. I believe his name is Thompson?"

"Put him through."

Why the head of security was calling her so early in the morning was unknown to her, but for all she knew it couldn't be good. That, and her intuition had already told her there was something off about this school as soon as she stepped through the gate and onto campus grounds. She will admit that Fremont High has one of the nicest campuses she has ever seen owned by a high school, but that did little to quell the pangs in her gut. With a sigh of exasperation she rubbed her temples, muttering "Not even an hour into my first day on the job and there's already an issue. Fuck my life," under her breath before picking up the receiver. "Hello? Thompson?" she said.

"Yes ma'am, this is Thompson, head of security. I'm in the surveillance room right now and there is a disturbance at the main entrance of the campus. Switch the surveillance monitor in your office to monitor 3 or 4 and you'll be able to see it."

Vicky swiped up the remote for the television in her office that could also be used to survey the security cameras strewn about campus, but just as she was about to flick it on she noticed commotion outside of her window. By peeking through the blinds she saw what Thompson described as a "disturbance." This wasn't just a plain disturbance to the newly appointed principal--it was unacceptable. Violence on school grounds is prohibited, and to the brunette, it appeared as if someone was trying to incite a riot given the small crowd gathered just inside the southern gate of the campus.

"Ma'am?" Thompson uttered through the phone.

"Don't worry, I'll take care of it," she assured the man with a firm tone and hung the phone up. After unlocking the bottom drawer of her desk, she retrieved a fine bottle of Grey Goose and poured herself a drink into a tumbler she had just drunken water out off. The Grey Goose looked no different than water, but it sure as hell smelled and tasted different. Vicky downed the entire glass in one go, which caused a mellow burn to travel down from her mouth to her stomach and her eyes to water. She gave herself a few light pounds to the chest and cleared her throat before replacing the bottle and locking it up. The vodka calmed her; it released some of the tension she felt earlier about being the new principal. At first, she didn't even know why she wanted this position. She had never even been a teacher before, so what made her think she was capable of governing an entire school full of children when she had zero experience watching over even just a classroom? Confidence in her abilities and compassion.

Prior to her, the students and teachers of Fremont High had suffered under the totalitarian-like rule of a cold, paranoid, and psychotic principal. The students and teachers had been oppressed and controlled by this tyrant and his deception, whose only objective was to gain power and wealth. The corporal punishment system was nothing new to Vicky, but it is evident that the CPS is susceptible to corruption given the previous principal's exploitation of it. Vicky believed she had far more credentials and was vastly more qualified for the job of principal at this school than the previous man was. That, and she cared deeply about the students. She wants them to succeed without having to fear their teachers or peers, something that the CPS intends to ingrain deeply into a student's mind.

All she could think about was a way to quell the storm standing a few metres away from her as she descended the short flight of stairs and smoothed out her maroon mid-thigh cut skirt. The heels of her boots clicked as she walked at a swift pace toward the crowd. Many of the students had several inches on her, but that didn't stop her from making her voice be heard.

"Children!" she exclaimed, her loud, maternal voice sweeping across the crowd and causing a few heads to turn in her direction.

"CHILDREN!" she repeated, except this time even louder and bolder, causing more heads to turn than the last time. At the first chance she could get, Vicky knelt down next to one of beaten up and grounded students. His bruised and bloody face made her cringe, and she couldn't help but force down a lump forming in her throat. The corporal punishment system was horrible if it subjected children to such abuse.

Cradling one out of many fallen, groaning students, Vicky shouted out, "So, who's man enough to take responsibility for this whole mess? Someone is getting punished for this, but not all of you are getting away with it."


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"Hey, Ray."

Ray turned his head, finding himself looking into the eyes of one of his classmates from last year. Of course, since they both made it to junior year, that meant that they would be classmates too. Ray had been here for two years, but he had yet to make that big a name for himself, except among the teachers of course, and the students who actually cared about studying. His twin brother, however, had made quite a different impression, being more troublesome than not.

"Did you hear? Fremont's got a new principal."

Oh, they did? Ray looked at her with a raised eyebrow, unbelieving her for a moment. However, he knew her quite enough to know that she would not lie, especially something about this. Ray turned his attention back to the podium. A new principal, huh? The last principal had indeed been a pain in the ass for Ray, especially since he had a brother like Light. It made him wonder how the new principal would be like? Male, or female? Local, or foreign? Such answers pretty much narrowed down the possibilities of how the new principal's attitude would be. Was he strict, or reasonable? Forgiving, or vengeful? Easily angered, or patient? Well, there was only one way to find out.

"So, which one is h-"

"CHILDREN!"

Ray's head turned, alongside many others as he found himself this time looking at a middle-aged woman wearing a pair of glasses, standing ever so firm near where the fight had been occurring earlier. He had not seen her before. Where was she from? At that, a theory hit his head and he turned back to her classmate. Pulling his right hand out of his pocket, he pointed towards her discreetly.

"Don't tell me that's our new principal?"

"Yup." She replied with not even the smallest of hesitation. Ray turned back to the female, letting out a soft sigh, his head tilting to the side, his hair covering part of his face then.

"Oh, boy."


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Pretty incredible.

High schoolers were such...well...let's just say they weren't very smart. Ternie thought back a few years...four or five actually. Had he ever started a pointless fight like this? To his count, he'd only started one, but that was sort of a gimme. The boy had been extremely delusional at that time, so maybe...yeah, he hadn't really started a single fight on a stupid premise.

But on the first day of school?

Not like it was his problem...

But still, seriously?

Aternity managed to find a small, out of the way spot, where he sat to watch the melee. It was quickly dispersed by the new administration, and that's when he caught glimpse of the new Mistress at the university. Not bad. Not bad at all. At least it wasn't anything like the old man. Maybe she'd get things done. Only time would tell.

"Establishing gang turf already...nothing has changed has it?"


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Staff Sergeant Max Fightmaster found himself on the scene only moments too late. He had been going over the Henry Knox grounds earlier that morning, checking on any last-minute adjustments to schedule and curriculum, when he had gotten wind of three boys talking about going over to Fremont to stir up some trouble with the other school.

The rivalry between the two schools was far beyond obvious. A small, enclosed area where all students were required to stay, and two schools with very different agendas, and very different personalities within? They were basically breeding these kids for conflict.

Max couldn't help but give a light smirk at the thought. At Knox, that was exactly what they were doing.

So, at first, he thought little of it. Maybe muss up some lockers, throw some things, a little harmless fun. It wasn't until he heard the shouts of a growing crowd that he realized what was happening. His grin turned to a scowl, and he threw his cap over his sandy blonde hair and took off at a dead sprint to the scene of the crime.

Such a massive breach of protocol would not go unpunished for these students.

While the new Principal of Fremont seemed to have a handle on things, Fightmaster muscled his way through the crowd, pushing bodily through a few of the students, shouting sharp, crisp instructions for them to move aside as he came through. Any Knox regulars would know the tone to be from a commanding officer and step aside immediately. Any slackers and/or Fremont natives who didn't know any better would be shoved aside, one of which would be Jinn Campbell.

Once he reached the clearing, Staff Sgt. Fightmaster would turn to face Victoria and lower his shades to look the woman in the face, his eyes meeting hers.

"My apologies, madam. This little stunt was pulled by students from my school. I can assure you it will not happen again."

Fightmaster turned on a heel, in crisp military style, and surveyed the damage his students had caused, or rather, the lack thereof. All three of his boys were on the ground, either in extreme pain or unconscious, and another boy, one Fightmaster recognized as a recent transfer to his school, was attempting to help them up.

""Already guys? C'mon, get up. The Director will be here soon. He doesn't need to see your sad asses laying here when he does."

"They've got worse troubles in store for them than anything the Director would have in mind, Weston," Fightmaster said with a stern authority. His eyes darted down to the Hispanic on the ground.

"Valdez!" he said, throwing a quick boot into the boy's midsection, powerful enough to lift him up onto his hands and knees from his fallen position. "This is your third year at Henry Knox, am I correct?"

The boy made no attempt to reply, and for that, Fightmaster put his foot on the boy's back and pressed down hard, slamming him back down onto the ground.

"Answer me, soldier!"

"Y... yes," the boy stammered. His reply was answered by another boot to the gut, lifting him back up, yet again, to hands and knees. Valdez coughed a few times, as if he were hacking up his nuts from the previous assault, and this new one wasn't helping matters either.

"Yes, what, soldier?!"

"... sir, yes sir!" Valdez said, trying to imitate the larger man's curt manners and speech.

"'Yes, sir' what, Valdez?"

"Yes sir, this is my third year at Henry Knox, sir." Another cough.

"Then ignorance of the rules is no excuse, is it, Valdez?"

"Sir, no sir," he said, being put on the spot like this not only embarrassing, but powerful enough to give him the energy needed to reply.

"Then you will tell me the rule you have just broken, soldier!"

"Mmmgh," Valdez grunted as he got himself to a kneeling position, no longer resting on both hands and knees. "The rule, sir... is, erm..." Valdez paused, as if unsure of the exact rule he had broken. Fightmaster's leg cocked back for another kick.

"No, wait!!!" Valdez exclaimed, throwing his hands up in front of himself in a feeble attempt to block the incoming blow. "I mean, sir, please, I have the answer, sir."

Max's foot relaxed, but his gaze, hidden behind his sunglasses, remained leveled intensely at Valdez. "Go on, private."

"A... a student of the Henry Knox Academy shall not engage in raucous or unruly behavior with the students of any of the other Chula Vista facilities, whether it be against or in conspiracy with said students... sir." It was almost straight from the textbook. If he wasn't so upset, the Staff Sergeant would have smiled.

"Then you'd do well to remember those words, Valdez," Fightmaster spoke again, much more quietly, almost paternally, before launching the boot into Valdez's chest, knocking him back and over onto his back. "Now get up, soldier. You've been tasked with getting these other two back to medical. If you're not all checked in by oh-eight-forty, you're all getting extra drills tonight, you hear me?"

Valdez answered not with his words, but by scrambling to his feet, despite the pain in his chest, ribs and balls, and struggling to lift both of his compatriots, or rouse them into a position where they could carry themselves.

Fightmaster had given them no more than fifteen minutes to traverse a rather long direction. It was doable, a fact the Staff Sergeant was well aware of, but no simple task. Valdez and the others would have to look forward to more work after classes.

"You," Max would say, his head snapping up to Samuel Weston with a calculated glare, hidden behind tinted lenses. There was ice in his voice. As far as he knew, the boy was an accomplice, however, it was unlikely. Valdez and his cronies were beaten handily, and Weston seemed to not have a scratch on him. It wasn't likely that whoever did this to the other Knox attendees simply decided to leave Weston alone.

"Weston, Samuel, am I correct?" Fightmaster left no room for correction. He knew he was right, anyway. "Who did this to Valdez and the other students?"

The question was direct, and to the point. Unlike Victoria's method of attempting to get the students to own up to their crimes, Fightmaster would take matters into his own hands. It was considered insubordination for a student at Henry Knox to refuse to answer a question asked of them by a commanding officer. If Weston did not out the one who did this to the Staff Sergeant, he'd face a fate worse than what was given to Valdez and company.

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Fresh school, fresh year, the same damn shit.

Ryker walked into the first day assembly with his usual attitude on school life, he would walk into a situation that would end with him dropping some punk to the ground and watch him sputter on his own blood an then spend the rest of the day with blood on his clothes to get the assholes the fuck off his back.

With blue collar shirt over a wife beater, unbuttoned an open, the sleeves rolled up near his elbows as he walked dejectedly into school. That and some worn jeans that weren't a stranger to the first day beat down.

"Hey, you little bastard, get your ass over here." Ryker raised his brow and turned his head toward the blaring idiot that was calling out at someone. The enraged expression, veins popping out of the forehead, and bloodshot eyes that were directed at him were almost comical. "You're the ceremonial punching bag, hope you can stay conscious long enough to get bloody."

Leaning forward as he walked at the punk who intended to use him as a punching bag, grinning. "How many people would just walk into that kind of shit?" Ryker asked as he shrugged out of the overshirt, holding it in his left fist as he suddenly sprang forward an swing his right elbow at the arrogant bastard, gritting his teeth and glaring angrily.

The punk raised his arms and held them together in front of his face for a shield, intercepting the impact by stepping back. "Not bad." He chuckled, opening his guard to the sight of the shirt inches from his face. Raising his right hand to pull the shirt away he began cursing, but didn't manage even a full swear before his body bucked to the right as Ryker connected a left hook into his ribcage.

Watching wide eyed he tried to raise his left hand to guard his head, afraid of how vulnerable he was to attack, but the right hook that followed simple went around the guard and slammed into his jaw. The larger body was slammed to the ground by the punch, a spray of blood coughed into the air as the impact forced the air out of his lungs.

Ryker stomped his right foot down onto the thugs rib cage and leaned down, grabbing his over shirt from the ground just next to him. "Same shit different day," he grumbled as he straightened up, cocking his head over his shoulder to see if he would get any more friendly introduction on his first day.


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The previous principal's antics are what lead Victoria to coin Fremont High's current motto--'Veritas vos liberatit'--meaning the "the truth will set you free." She didn't want to hide things from her students or subordinates. She held a firm belief that no information should never be witheld from those who are entitled to it, and the students and staff of Fremont High have a right to know about matters concerning their school.

What unfolded before her eyes once Max Fightmaster entered the scene was almost horrific to the petite brunette. As was forementioned, Vicky was no stranger to the corporal punishment system; however, it seemed like her parents--her father in particular--had been carefully selective in where they sent their one and only daughter to school at. She had seen her fair share of slaps, and even experienced some in her rebellious years, but it all seemed like a distant fantasy compared to what her emerald eyes imbibed at the moment.

With a grimace she turned her head away as Fightmaster brutally beat one of his students, the dull thumps and pained groans of the child torturing her ears like nails on a chalkboard. This was one of the biggest issues Victoria had with the system; how adults had so much authority over the students. It was no wonder some schools became completely corrupt and controlled by the staff, or the exact opposite, where students rebelled and took control of the school themselves.

Placing the student down gently, she rose to her feet. Even with her heels the Staff Sargeant still dwarfed her. She was about to place a hand on his shoulder to prevent him from injuring the student again, but by then they had already run off. Vicky was beginning to feel agitated because it felt as if control of the situation was out of her hands, so when Fightmaster boldly addressed one of the boys, she walked up behind Fightmaster and placed a hand on his shoulder, giving it a firm squeeze to get his attention.

"Although I understand that they are your students and you have the best discplinary actions in mind, I feel that because all of this occured on soil that is governed by me, I am responsible. Your students may have provoked it, but my students took the bait when they should have known better. I believe we should get the injured students to the campus infirmary ASAP," she stated, squatting down and attempting to pick up one of the fallen students. Victoria's small frame couldn't handle the larger boy's weight, and after an embarassing struggle she put the boy back down.

Her cheeks were tinted red, and she cleared her throat to dispell any anxiety that may have come out when she spoke. "You and you," she said, pointing out the two currently most outspoken students, that being a long-haired Chinese student (Tiao Lei Shen) and a taller American student (Alden Varro), "I want you guys to take students to the campus infirmary. It is located north-west of here in the Varsity Building. Please and thanks guys, I'd appreciate it."


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"You're going already...?"
["We're sorry, Ian. But mommy has a meeting to go to, and daddy has a client to meet with."]
{"We promise to come visit during the weekend. You're a big boy now, Ian. Make daddy proud."}

Ah, the feeling of abandonment had never been so strong up until now. Ian realized that his parents would be leaving him, and prepared himself emotionally so that he wouldn't burst out crying and embarrass himself and his parents, but no amount of prepping for the rush of emotions was enough. Although he did not cry, he most certainly felt empty and alone, especially as he watched his parents drive off together. His parents weren't bad people; they made sure Ian's belongings got to his room safely, and as for Arcanine...he would be at home until the weekend, because there was no room in the car with all of Ian's things. Not that he brought a lot; he just happened to have a lot of spare clothes because...well, kids being kids, they get dirty a lot. Not from soiling themselves, but from rolling in the mud.

He watched his parents' car drive off until it turned into a speck before turning around to see lots and lots of tall people around him. Well no duh, he was at the parking lot, and her certainly knew his way to the K-5 building because it was the closest one, but he was feeling adventurous! So rather than going south toward his school building, he headed west! Of course, he didn't know that the building in the west department was for grades 9-12, but he did know that all the people around him were tall as heck. Except maybe that little girl over there, with her mom and dad holding hands...but he turned his gaze away and pretended he didn't see them as bitterness crept up...

Ian suddenly wished he had Arcanine with him. His parents wasn't even sure if he was allowed to bring pets into the campus, only because surely there were some students who were allergic. But...he would only keep Arcanine in his room, and outside... It wasn't as if he would bring him to class, because then that could create a ruckas. He was trained not to pee or poo inside, knew when to bark and when not to, knew how to sit, roll and give a handshake...

The young Asian boy approached the large group of people that had gathered around...something. He couldn't see, but was super curious! So he eventually got around to see what was going on. There was a scary lookin' buff dude beating the crap out of students, at which Ian frowned and slowly took a step back, bumping into someone... He looked up to find a tall person, but with the sun in his eye couldn't exactly tell who the person was.

"Sorry.." he muttered, before turning back to the scene, where a woman with class - who kind of reminded him of his mother - ordered two students to take the fallen to the infirmary. Ian looked around and saw no one his age, and decided it might be time for him to leave, considering the others might get the wrong idea and start saying stupid things, like, 'leave this for the big kids'...

Yeah, you know what?

Big kids, my ass.


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It seemed that what had become a simple traditional brawl between the two schools of the collective had expanded into something a little more significant, attracting the attention of many, even Ray's, whom was commonly against violence. It was not that that had attracted him, though. It was the presence of the Knox Academy's in-charge, or otherwise known as the Staff Sergeant. It was getting everyone's attention. At that, the curious little genius left his classmate, making his way through the crowd as he reached the border of the clearing that had been made due to the event, his eyes still analysing the situation quite carefully.

Max Fightmaster, it seemed, was one follower of the corporal punishment system that Ray had read had spread to every school in America. The system where teachers were given freedom to physically reprimand students who went out of line. He gritted at the thought of the system, unsure of what the man who made it was thinking when he did develop the system. He disapproved of the system, of course, and much to his surprise, so did his new Headmaster. His eyes widened in amusement as she turned away from the violent scene.

It seemed that Ray had completely misjudged her. A moment later, he grinned. Apparently, he had been wrong. As rare as it was, he was wrong.

His attention focused on the female for a moment, watching then as she approached the Staff Sergeant, apparently brave enough to confront the male despite his sheer display of superiority just a minute earlier. He nodded his head slowly. His impression of her was just getting better. She was passionate, as he had noticed, for the student's welfare, and also was brave enough to ensure that they were given the best treatment.

However, it seemed that she lacked the physical ability to backup her attitude, though Ray could not really blame her. She was a female, after all, and it did not seem that she was used to the battlefield. Ray sighed, tilting his head once more, before letting out a soft chuckle of amusement. That was enough embarrassment for the day. He was just about to step forward and help, when she pointed out two other students to do as such. Ray glanced towards them, before giving a soft grin. Well, that's alright, then.

At that, Ray staggered forward as someone bumped into him from behind. The Asian turned around, looking up to see who it was, though finding no reasonable culprit. No one was looking towards his direction, nor looked like they had any intention to go after him.

"Sorry.."

Ray looked down at the source of the voice and found himself looking at one of Knox Elementary's students. He chuckled, before giving a soft smile.

"Nah, it's alright. You new here?"


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When the guy staggered forward and turned around, Ian gave a quiet sigh. The dude looked right over him until he muttered an apology, to which the dude finally looked down and chuckled. Seriously, was Ian THAT short?! Well, it wasn't even a question to ask, considering the guy was almost as tall as his dad. It was hard to imagine himself growing to be as tall as 5'11" with his baby face and ... yeah. Still, Ian was anticipating a, 'Get lost, kid,' or something along those lines, but instead was taken surprised when a friendly voice spoke out. And it confirmed the gender of the anonymous person because of the tone, unless it was a female with a male's voice...which would be kind of sad. For her, I mean.

["Nah, it's alright. You new here?"]
"Yeah..."

Ian really had no idea what else to say. He never really interacted with someone older than him other than his family and teachers, so, you could say that there would be a sense of awkwardness for a brief moment. Or at least, Ian thought it was awkward. You'd think that Ian would make friends with others in an instant and have someone to look up to, but sometimes, it didn't work that way. Especially because in their current situation, there were people being taken to the nurse, and it wasn't the right time, per say, to jump up and down like any other seven year old.

But Ian was not like that. It was not a time to play, nor was it a time to work, so he would settle with his mentality for somewhere in between.

"I'm Ian. You're super tall..."

Oh, the innocense...

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"Yeah..."

Ah, he was young, he was new, he was small, he was Asian and he seemed quite innocent indeed. An obviously perfect victim for bullying. After all, they were in America, and not all Americans viewed the Asians as equals. Ray knew how that felt. He used to be like he was, after all. Especially with a loud-mouthed brother that he had, Ray had often been forced to help his brother out in difficult and painful situations. This kid was going to get the same treatme- No, wait. He was attending Knox Elementary. Good luck to him.

"I'm Ian. You're super tall..."

Ray chuckled, not replying for a moment as he turned around, giving the situation behind him a quick glance, before turning back to his company for the day. He had thought to attend the first day of school with his twin brother, but that goddamn male had gone absent once more. Ray gave him a small smile, before shaking his head. He was not that tall. In fact, he was averagely-tall. It was just that these Americans were much taller indeed. Save for Yao Ming, of course. That man's just inhuman.

"Haha, not exactly. It's Reito, but call me Ray, please. Oh, and nice to meet you, Ian."

Ray smiled. He had to wonder, though, how the kid got an English name. Did he have English parents? Or were they Asian Americans, like Ray's parents? Such would result in an English name like Ian did. Ray, however, had an Asian name, actually, and it was Reito, but due to simplicity's sake, he picked up the nickname, Ray. He turned his attention away for a moment, scanning his surroundings as a single question lingered in his head.

... When was the ceremony going to start?


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Correction. We're establishing the A listers now, so we don't have this problem later.

Alden would shake his head slightly, straightening up a bit as the Chinese male who had spoke, and been the one to cause some of that trouble earlier, placed his hand on Alden's shoulder. Now, Alden wasn't really one to be touched by other people that he didn't know. He didn't like it, but he didn't want to cause any more trouble. Especially when Staff Sgt. Max Fightmaster appeared on the scene. This drill sergeant had always seemed like a hard ass. But that was his job. And Alden wasn't about to step out of line and get his own earful.

There was a lot going on, and Alden himself would allow those amber hazel eyes to slide from person to person. There seemed to be quite a few high-ranking staff members here now. The yearly fights were getting far more attention this year than previously. Regardless, it wasn't too long before a rather attractive authority figure singled out this Knox Junior and his touchy-feely Asian "friend" in front of him.

You and you, I want you guys to take students to the campus infirmary. It is located north-west of here in the Varsity Building. Please and thanks guys, I'd appreciate it.

Shrugging the hand off his shoulder, Alden would straighten up a bit more, and instinctively his hands would slide over the Desert Camouflage Henry Knox uniform, and call out almost as soon as he had heard her speak. He was use to answering the authority figures in such a manner. Hell, Alden's father had taught him how to address military personnel at an early age.

"Yes, Ma'am!"

Alden would glance toward Tiao and then swiftly move past him, those uniformed boots of his thudding slightly against the ground as he moved through the crowd to the downed boys on the ground. He'd glance toward the Staff Sergeant and then crouched as he prepared himself to pick up one of the boys.

He could feel the glares from some of the Fremont students as he had attention brought to him. Alden didn't quite get the feud between the two. He didn't hold grudges like they obviously did. After hoisting one of the male's arms around his shoulder he would lift him up and prepare himself to head toward the infirmary.

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Day one.

To be honest, Nero expected very little from the students at his high school. The vast majority had always bowed to their disciplinary masters, letting their fellow students get brutally punished without protest, They were spineless, weak.

Ordinary.

Nero leaned against the cool bricks of the school wall, insulated by his leather trench coat and blue dress shirt, his arms folded in front of his chest as he regarded the growing crowd around the entrance to the school. Another fight had begun to break out, though from what little the young man could see, it wouldn't be worth watching. The single fighter would no doubt win, the way he carried himself and the conditioning of his body far outweighed the mere number advantage his opponents held against him. Sure enough, the Chinese male tore his foes apart, giving some speech afterwards about how he was an alpha male or some such nonsense which caused Nero to roll his eyes.

Why is it that every person who can throw a punch believes that they're something special?

Bored with the scene already, Nero pushed himself off the wall, intending to walk away and head inside towards his locker, when he heard the words that had come in the aftermath of the battle. They have no idea who did it. Slowly, he turned around, then began walking back towards the circle, calmly and gently easing his way through the students in order to stand in the front row of those watching Fightmaster's demonstration on his own student.The way the man spoke caused Nero to bristle inwardly, he could hear the larger man's authority and demand for respect. He was everything that Nero had grown to hate. As he voiced his own query for who had started the mess, Nero would step forward quietly, off to the man's right side, waiting until the principal finished speaking before doing so himself, his tone serious and with an undercurrent of anger.

"I did it. And I fully intend on doing it again."

It didn't matter that Nero hadn't done anything of the sort, and considering he had no friends among the student body, he imagined none would attempt to correct him. Even if they did, however, Nero intended on making sure he made his desired impression.

"It's obvious that all the military training you've given your students is subpar at best, if they're being beaten so easily by mere high school kids. Maybe you should teach them how to fight on their feet, instead of how to get beaten on their backs?"

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Children?

Jinn’s grin grew wide as the voice approached from further in the campus. By now, at this time, the crowd at become much larger than before, hosting not only the few students who looked like they could handle themselves, but the Director, some flunky, and the Principle herself! This was Jinn’s first time seeing her in person and the way she stood there looking at the students before she spoke, stopping them in their tracks threw off a certain feeling of dominance. Seemed like she was fairly capable.

She looked at the Students, ordering the one who was responsible to step forward, but, really, how many students wanted to be the first to experience the wrath of a new Principle. Jinn was wise and he wanted to be able to at least function for the first few weeks of school without any real heat watching over him.

Jinn’s thoughts were shoved aside, as was his body when a rather large military man made his way through the crowd. And just who was this? He seemed too old to be a student, and was bossy enough to be in the military. Jinn had to wonder if the man worked over at Henry Knox. What he was pleased to see was that this man was taking the blame for the students over at his[/] military academy, meaning he was the “principle” of that part of the collective. With so many important powers in one place, Jinn was almost giddy with excitement.

This “Fightmaster” showed incredible leadership towards his students. Jinn was surprised at the direction he took, yet impressed all the same. The way he handled the students on the ground, while Jinn was never one to enjoy the military, couldn’t help, but respect the sight in front of him. The Sergeant ordered the one Hispanic boy around, having complete control until he allowed said student to grab hold of his comrades and drag them over to some medical facility. Jinn, having traversed most of the collective through the years knew how far the trip was and how difficult it would be for the student. But you had to fight for what you believed in. Pushing himself to the limit was just another trial for the young Hispanic boy, “Valdez” to endure.

Two students were selected by the Principle to take the aftermath of the brawl to the infirmary so they could be properly taken care of. It was very easy to see the different views of the two heads and how they would act at their respective grounds. Jinn was thankful for the amount of knowledge he gained in such a short time.

What really got Jinn’s blood going was when another one of the Fremont students making his way right up to Fightmaster. The amount of attitude this student was throwing off was enough to make any other student sick and Jinn had to wonder if he could back it up. He walked up to the outlandish student and the Fightmaster, making himself known to the crowd.

“I have to wonder. Are you just planning on pissing everyone off with your lip or are you planning on backing it up any time soon, kid?”


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Well, wasn't this all an interesting turn of events. Delilah decided now was the best time to step in. Little Miss Other School had done a fine job sending the poor little brats to the nurse. Honestly? If they got in a fight, they should deal with their wounds. If they needed the nurse, then they should crawl themselves to the nurse. Or ask for help themselves. To take care of them, to give them attention? It was showing them that loosing was okay. Maybe it was for the woman in charge of Fremont, but for Delilah is wasn't. Weak, that's what it was.

So when one of the students stepped up and had the balls to out and out say he did it, Delilah mentally cheered for him. What she did physically was rather different. A smug little smirk appeared on her ruby red lips and she strode forward so she was standing right next to him. Those icy eyes looked at him, the older woman giving off an aura that suggested... violence.

"It seems to me that fighting really isn't allowed on Fremont Campus young sir. I do believe this calls for some punishment of sorts."

Her voice was velvet, and spoke volumes of high up bringing and money. And every word had an edge to it. The woman glanced at the other female in the area, who was bossing kids around. Telling them to take other kids to the nurse. The fightmaster whats-his-face-kinda-cute-and-aggresive was handling his students. So, who was to handle this cutie?

"I think something beyond detention and writing 'I will not beat the shit out of other kids' doesn't quite cover it. Beating up students from another school, stating you'll do it again, and insulting a faculty member. I'd make you run ten laps around the entire campus shouting you wouldn't do it again the entire time." Those icy eyes slid to the brunette female. "But that's her job to decide. Be careful once you get into O'Hare boy, you'll probably be sent to my office many times with that behavior."

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Rolling his neck Ryker took his foot off the thugs chest and took a look at his overshirt as he walked toward the faculty. After flapping some dust off the shirt he tossed it over his shoulder and sighed, it was great to not have to be building up the balls to tell his pop he wrecked a new shirt. The old bastard took appearance pretty seriously.

There was several students gather near the faculty, which seemed odd to him. How many of them actually liked to hang around adults? Well it was a pretty odd, but the one that was actually getting himself set in the cross hairs of the faculty just made no sense whatsoever. Well it has nothing to do with me, but...

Ryker heaved a sigh an cursed under his breath, standing himself a couple feet to the side of the student claiming he had some hand in whatever kind of violence had happened. "Well he's obviously a dumb ass, but that doesn't mean he isn't right. What kind of soldiers are you training if they get beat up by someone like him?" Jerking his arm to the side he pointed his thumb at the student, obviously unimpressed.

For fucks sake, he had been through military bases for years an even the desk workers didn't get their asses handed to them by anybody. Hell, if that's the best they can do it's a damn good thing they didn't put me in the military academy, that's just fucking pathetic.

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Max always hated things like this.

This place, this school, it lacked the discipline that his Academy had. It was to be expected, after all, as his was a military academy and this was simply a high school. The problems with that, however, lied directly within situations such as these. When large groups of people get together, things tended to get unruly. If this had occurred at Henry Knox, such would have never been an issue. All instructors and trainers there are well-versed in keeping large groups of students in line at one time.

A sight escaped his lips, noticeable, if slight. It seemed the new Principal of Fremont had an issue with things. Her hand went to his shoulder, and she implored him to allow her some control of what was going on. Max assessed the situation, and would have scowled if not in the presence of a fellow officer. Fightmaster was not particularly aware of Fremont's faculty hierarchy, or furthermore, of the de facto rank each would hold as far as his subordination to them. With nothing else to fall back on, Fightmaster relied upon the best available option: Courtesy and gentlemanliness.

"As you wish, ma'am," Fightmaster said, turning to look down at her. She asked two nearby students to assist Valdez in bringing the other students to the infirmary. He noticed that one of the ones she asked was Alden Varro, one of his students. He would say nothing, not wishing to impede on the Principal's authority, but he would lower his shades and look at the boy, giving him a look that said 'you know what to do.' Alden complied quickly, without the aid of Fightmaster's look, and this brought an unseen smile to the mind of the Military Director of Henry Knox.

At about this time, a boy came up and confessed to the fight. He spoke in harsh tones to the Staff Sergeant, causing Fightmaster to whirl around to face him, eyes, hidden behind dark shades, flashing surprise and no small amount of indignation. Was this truly what Fremont offered up as a student body?

A student came up to challenge the boy's claim, and Max wanted to leave. The lack of discipline here at Fremont was atrocious, and he couldn't help but think it was the coddling nature of this principal that led to it. Regardless, his place was not to judge, nor to interfere. In fact, he did not care to know who had decimated his students in the pursuit of finding punishment.

He needed to know who at Fremont was strong enough to do this.

He doubted this one was the culprit. A quick look around the crowd, and Fightmaster could see the puzzled looks of the students. No one would come to his aid and say otherwise, certainly, but most of these students were out of the loop of whatever game the sharp-featured boy was playing, and it showed on their faces. Another woman in power decided to speak up, publicly chastising the boy, and Fightmaster was starting to feel very anxious. What was this, a public forum? It would appear that he had stepped directly in the middle of a massive power-trip, and even worse, had publically engaged in it himself without knowing. He ignored all others, and simply spoke to Weston again, looking to get out of there as soon as possible.

"Weston, if you will. I have matters to attend to elsewhere."

No matter what this brash youngster had said, Fightmaster held faith that his student would speak the truth.

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It's obvious that all the military training you've given your students is subpar at best, if they're being beaten so easily by mere high school kids. Maybe you should teach them how to fight on their feet, instead of how to get beaten on their backs?

Alden heard those words and he couldn't stop himself from halting his movements. He'd shift slightly, and toss those amber orbs toward the male who had spoken directly toward his Drill Sergeant. He knew that stopping was probably a bad idea, but the kid who spoke was already rubbing him the wrong way. He would probably regret this later on, but he was going to speak his mind here and now.

"Subpar? I think you should be careful of what you say. Don't make the mistake of thinking everyone from Knox is weak."

Alden would once again shift his eyes toward the Drill Sergeant. He was expect some kind of demerit for speaking out of line. But he liked speaking his mind. Even if it wasn't the best tactic to use in a military academy. He wasn't scared though. The worst part would be if his father caught word of his 'insubordination'. He wouldn't move just yet. He couldn't. He was waiting to hear a reply, or for Fightermaster to order him away.

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