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Mikhail Ivanov(Complete)
« May 25, 2009 14:04:54 GMT -6 »


Personal Information:
    [/b] John C. Fremont High School
    Year: Senior, Grade 12

    Name: Ivanov, Mikhail, Boris
    Alias: Mikhail, Boris, The Fury
    Date of Birth: January 13th
    Age: 18 years old
    Nationality: Russian
    Ethnicity: Russian
    Blood Type: AB
    Height: 6’7”
    Weight: 315 lbs
    Hair: long-ish black hair
    Eye Color: light blue
    Handedness: left handed
    Sexual Orientation:Straight[/ul]

    Grades:
    Str:B
    Dex:D
    Con:B
    Wis”D



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        [/b]
        He is a stickler for respect and if someone insults him or his friends he will make that person apologize usually by brute force if necessary. He follows orders if they agree with him, otherwise he won’t even listen. Not a genius by any stretch of the word, he is still capable of analysing situations and reacting accordingly to them. He will fight anyone who challenges him but will refrain from killing them unless ordered otherwise. He hates anyone who picks on smaller people than them and usually shows no mercy to them. Also due to his upbringing he views the teachers as the highest form of power in the school and thus would challenge them. He doesn’t care at all about physical pain and any punishment involving it wouldn’t affect him too badly. He has a very impulsive personality and would normally rush into a dangerous situation without thinking of the consequences. That behaviour has gotten him into trouble in the past and it seems he still hasn’t learned from it.[/ul]

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          [/i] black
          Favourite animal: wolf
          Likes: fighting, stealth missions, friends, bells, Russian National Anthem
          Dislikes: bullies, disrespect, loud noises, modern music, following orders, certain soups, salads, cranberry juice, grapefruit juice.
          Hobbies: training, fighting, eating, sleeping.
          Extracurricular activies: Football team
          Talents: Fighting
          Note: [/ul]

          Combat:Combat Sambo
            [/b] Combat Sambo is a martial art taught in the Russian military. It focuses on unarmed combat, throws and submissions. Sambo kicks are different from other kicks as they aim for the joints in a person’s arms and legs instead of the upper body. Their punches also focus on breaking joints or bones and through training a Sambo specialist cam use them with deadly results. Soldiers are also trained in armed Sambo but that is never encouraged to be used outside the battlefield. He was trained in the use of knives, guns and his fists and is capable of using them with deadly proficiency.
            Weaknesses: because of his height, Boris is really slow and unable to dodge most fast attacks. He is also unable to turn sharply by himself and has a low center of gravity making him easier to flip. Due to his height, his field of vision doesn’t extend completely to the bottom of his feet and thus his ankles and lower leg area are usually unprotected. His inability to read opponent’s moves usually results in him taking a lot of hits and never walks out of a fight unscathed.
            Strengths:He is very muscular and strong, having trained from a young age. He has great endurance, being able to last for a very long time in combat and his build also allows him to take a certain degree of punishment. Since his version of Combat Sambo focuses on letting his opponent’s get close then crushing them with his great strength, his inability to read their moves is a great asset as well as a weakness: If his opponents see that he can’t dodge, they would get careless and lower their guard thus getting in to his range and falling to his grapples or strikes. He is extremely loyal to his friends and would fight to the death for them as well as give them any assistance if it was in his power.[/ul]

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              Ok i hope this is better, if not just say and i'll redo it

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              Mikhail Ivanov(Complete)
              « May 25, 2009 15:41:08 GMT -6 »
              Not bad so far, but you need to expand a little in almost every sections. I need:

              -At least two small paragraphs in appearance

              -Two small paragraphs in apparel

              -AT LEAST double your personality length

              -Just expand on your history, stregnths and weaknesses.

              For the most part, you got all the main aspects. Just put in some more detail and you'll be golden.

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              Mikhail Ivanov(Complete)
              « May 26, 2009 23:02:59 GMT -6 »
              Alright, my demands have been met. Welcome you big ass man.

              Approved!

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