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« Apr 26, 2009 22:48:26 GMT -6 »

Outside of the city limits most people have never heard of the Chula Vista Collective.  As far as most people are concerned Chula Vista is a dead end, nothing to see and nothing important.  However to those that are approached about it they know there is something more.  Troubled students across the country, those known for causing serious problems from violent outbursts to starting riots are contacted.  They are given the option for a clean slate, a fresh start, and most of all a challenge.  Along with the most troubled students, some of the more gifted students are also approached.  Told about untold opportunities in these private schools.  Fully funded by the Government, in both cases those that accept are transferred to Chula Vista in California.  All expenses paid for the students that are selected.  

First glance would lead someone to think that the Chula Vista Collective is everything the Government promised and more.  Harsh and strict discipline to keep the troubled students in line and shape them in to productive members of society.  State of the art equipment provided in the classrooms, far better then anything found in normal public schools.  

However, with a second look it is easy to see that under the surface trouble is bubbling, from the rivalry between the three schools and the Director of the School Board, to the dissent among the students that chafe against the overly harsh discipline of the Collective.  

Secrets seem to be everywhere, why is the military guarding a building being constructed on the Academy grounds?  Who are the strange people that the Minister of the University keeps meeting with?  What is the Principle going to do about the whispers of riot that can be heard in the hall?

There is only one way to know, and that is to enroll in the Chula Vista Collective.  Do you have what it takes to enter and survive?  Or will you break like so many before you?


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« Apr 27, 2009 9:28:04 GMT -6 »

Reading this ad reminded me that we should probably divert from the "fresh slate" aspect of why students are brought to The Collective - that's become something of a cliche in XIN. We should discuss that aspect further.

Still, beyond that Ryan, I really liked it. I think it's an excellent ad description for us. Good work bro. :P

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« May 18, 2009 2:42:16 GMT -6 »

As I was advertising our site link on PHS 42 and the "new" 552, I set this up as the advertisement there. I wanted to check with you guys if it's any good in case we decide to make it the copy/paste ad.




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Sitting comfortably in the city limits of San Diego, most people have never heard of the Chula Vista Collective. So far as they're concerned, The Collective is a dead end, nothing to see and nothing to hear. Yet, to those approached with its enticing existence can sense much more at hand. Troubled students across the United States, infamous for serious transactions of violent outbursts or starting riots find themselves contacted. Given new opportunities for survival, an escape from the System, a chance to soar into dominance - or even glory - the offer is often too much to refuse . These children, both the gifted and deadly, are then brought together as one united body. Fully funded by the federal government, in both cases those that accept are transferred to Chula Vista in California. All expenses paid for the students that are selected.

First glance would lead someone to think that the Chula Vista Collective is everything the Government promised and more. Harsh and strict discipline to keep the troubled students in line and shape them in to productive members of society. State of the art equipment provided in the classrooms, far better then anything found in normal public schools.

However, with a second look it is easy to see that under the surface trouble is bubbling, from the rivalry between the three schools and the Director of the School Board, to the dissent among the students that chafe against the overly harsh discipline of the Collective.

Secrets seem to be everywhere, why is the military guarding a building being constructed on the Academy grounds? Who are the strange people that the Minister of the University keeps meeting with? What is the Principal going to do about the whispers of riot that can be heard in the hall?

There is only one way to know, and that is to enroll in the Chula Vista Collective. Do you have what it takes to enter and survive? Or will you break like so many before you?

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    [li]New Development System - Letter Grades
    [/li][li]Three Rival Schools: Public High, Military K-12 and University
    [/li][li]Broader World - Adult Plots to Develop
    [/li][li]No Items, Qi or Stat Transferring - just History
    [/li][li]Hyper-realistic Physics - "Reality on Crack"
    [/li][li]Plot-Driven Events
    [/li][li]Diverse Community - All corners of XIN and beyond
    [/li][li]More to Come![/li][/ul]

    Think you have what it takes to survive this new world? Then join us, and become a part of THE COLLECTIVE![/blockquote][/font][/color]

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    [blockquote][color=lightblue][font=corbel]Sitting comfortably in the city limits of San Diego, most people have never heard of the Chula Vista Collective. So far as they're concerned, The Collective is a dead end, nothing to see and nothing to hear. Yet, to those approached with its enticing existence can sense much more at hand. Troubled students across the United States, infamous for serious transactions of violent outbursts or starting riots find themselves contacted. Given new opportunities for survival, an escape from the System, a chance to soar into dominance - or even glory - the offer is often too much to refuse . These children, both the gifted and deadly, are then brought together as one united body. Fully funded by the federal government, in both cases those that accept are transferred to Chula Vista in California. All expenses paid for the students that are selected.

    First glance would lead someone to think that the Chula Vista Collective is everything the Government promised and more. Harsh and strict discipline to keep the troubled students in line and shape them in to productive members of society. State of the art equipment provided in the classrooms, far better then anything found in normal public schools.

    However, with a second look it is easy to see that under the surface trouble is bubbling, from the rivalry between the three schools and the Director of the School Board, to the dissent among the students that chafe against the overly harsh discipline of the Collective.

    Secrets seem to be everywhere, why is the military guarding a building being constructed on the Academy grounds? Who are the strange people that the Minister of the University keeps meeting with? What is the Principal going to do about the whispers of riot that can be heard in the hall?

    There is only one way to know, and that is to enroll in the Chula Vista Collective. Do you have what it takes to enter and survive? Or will you break like so many before you?

    [ul][b][u]The Details[/b][/u]

    [li]New Development System - Letter Grades
    [/li][li]Three Rival Schools: Public High, Military K-12 and University
    [/li][li]Broader World - Adult Plots to Develop
    [/li][li]No Items, Qi or Stat Transferring - just History
    [/li][li]Hyper-realistic Physics - "Reality on Crack"
    [/li][li]Plot-Driven Events
    [/li][li]Diverse Community - All corners of XIN and beyond
    [/li][li]More to Come![/li][/ul]

    Think you have what it takes to survive this new world? Then join us, and become a part of THE COLLECTIVE![/blockquote][/font][/color]


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