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Mendoza Juliet
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Juliet Mendoza


Personal Information:


    [/b] John C. Fremont High
    Year: Junior

    Name: Juliet Mendoza
    Alias: Capulet
    Date of Birth: July 5th 19XX
    Age:17
    Nationality: American
    Ethnicity: Spanish-Vietnamese
    Blood Type: A
    Height: 5'6"
    Weight: 140 lbs
    Hair Colour: Chestnut Brown
    Eye Color: Honey
    Handedness: Right-Handed
    Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual[/ul][/center]

    Physical Appearance:



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          Miscellaneous Information:
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            • She can speak Vietnamese and Spanish besides English.
            • Shes an only child.
            • She loves to play basketball and dance, while she herself is very gifted in athletics.
            • Contrary to the gift in sports, shes horrible in her academic courses, except for languages as she is able to catch on quick.
            • Formally trained with different types of ballroom dancing .while tango remains her strong point, she does join competitions regularly.

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            Personal Assets
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              2009 Mitsubishi Eclipse[/ul]

              Combat:

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                Juliet doesn't practice a particular style or technique. If anything, she is aggressive and likes hand-to-hand combat in close ranges. Although she's not quick, her stamina and strength are her strong points and Juliet uses those attributes to her advantage when fighting. She likes to disable her opponents or force them into submission when she sees an opening. Making use of her movements, Juliet doesn't like unnecessary motion and would only strike and take an offensive stance when she could lay a hit on her opponent. Once she strikes, she strikes hard.

                Most of the time Juliet prefers her opponent to make the moves while she would counter them and send a strong punch back while taking advantage of her environment. Although she is not particularly skilled with grappling techniques, Juliet uses a mixture of strikes, throws, joint-locks, and pinning as a preference. However Juliet is also a type of fighter that would not mind getting into a "dog-fight" where no rules apply and no mercy is given and no specific 'technique' is used. A fight to the death with whatever methods works well with Juliet's prideful nature.

                Weaknesses:
                Juliet's reflexes and speed is considered weak, as she is slow in her movement and reflexes, hence she takes a lot of damage and is often outmaneuvered by her opponents. Even though she can read her opponents moves, her body cannot move fast enough to dodge or counter it. Since she's not a trained fighter, she is often clumsy with her moves or footwork which could get her tripping or pulling a move that would injure herself rather than her opponent. Her emotions are also easily manipulated and triggered, therefore it would blind her from analyzing her opponents' moves and it would make her easily manipulated.
                Strengths:
                If she lands a hit on her opponents, it would definitely hurt. Juliet is physically strong and has a good stamina so that she can endure long strenuous activity. She also has high pain tolerance hence she doesn't mind getting injured. Juliet has keen eyes from being a dancer making her quite observant in movement. [/ul]


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                  Base Grade Stats
                  Strength: B
                  Dexterity: E
                  Consitution: B
                  Wisdom: C


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                  « May 15, 2009 1:13:39 GMT -6 »
                  1. If your character is well endowed and curvy, she would not be 109 pounds at 5'6", she would be on the lighter side to be honest. Please change the weight if you wish to keep her endowed and curvy. It'd make a nice figure, but nothing overtly curve like.

                  2. Please up your font size a tad. It's a bit of a strain for the eyes in the quantity.

                  3. Capitalize your Misc. Info.

                  4. Strengths out balance your weaknesses. You state you are strong, can endure, and can take a hit. That's a little too unbalanced for being emotional, and slow.

                  5. Broken link at the end of weaknesses/strengths. Please fix.

                  6. There are some misspellings in your bio. Please fix.

                  Once these are fixed, I shall look over again. Thank you.

                  ~Delilah

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                  « May 16, 2009 16:08:48 GMT -6 »
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